misshoneywell ([info]misshoneywell) wrote,
2006-08-07 02:04:00
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Twisted- Part One

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[info]bluebear_74

August 7 2006, 07:35:39 UTC 5 years ago

I'm glad you decided to post the story here on Live Journal and join the community.

This is a great start and I can't wait for more. I also liked the switching of the POVs half way through.

Anonymous

August 7 2006, 08:55:56 UTC 5 years ago

Interesting

I liked that. Keep going.
I saw your "ad" in the Blade forum at comicmonsters.com.
Maybe I should try my hand at this alternate reality thing.

[info]ladynaberrie

August 7 2006, 09:17:33 UTC 5 years ago

Coooooooool.

[info]gothic_nyx

August 7 2006, 12:48:07 UTC 5 years ago

This is an awesome story. Very well written on both points of view. I can't wait to read more :)

[info]psychicpilgrim

August 7 2006, 17:30:54 UTC 5 years ago

Welcome to the community!

Good pacing. I like how you illustrated their conflicted feelings. Please do continue! :)

[info]eve_28

August 8 2006, 05:06:56 UTC 5 years ago

Wonderful! I love it, you really showed the conflict and tension between the two characters. I can't wait to read chapter 2! So hurry up sweetie!:)

[info]carolannw5

August 10 2006, 01:25:22 UTC 5 years ago

Awesome Story!

Thank you for writing this fic! I was also disappointed that there is hardly any Blade: The Series Fanfic! Awesome Start!

[info]spuffy_seeker

August 10 2006, 17:30:36 UTC 5 years ago

this was a very good start. i very much liked his pov and how he let us into his head and thoughts on being a vamp.

would love to read more.

Anonymous

August 15 2006, 02:50:11 UTC 5 years ago

Awsome keep going

Anonymous

August 15 2006, 03:25:34 UTC 5 years ago

Love it so far, very well written. Can't wait for an update.

[info]eve_28

August 19 2006, 04:06:25 UTC 5 years ago

Wow! great story! Now...where is chapter two,hmmmmm? :)

Anonymous

August 22 2006, 22:27:52 UTC 5 years ago

Wow!

Just browsing the unofficial fan site and noticed this posting called twisted.

Well done... just like the tv series this keeps you wanting more. What a great story line and unique perspective!!

[info]teekoness

September 16 2006, 04:13:59 UTC 5 years ago

This is a fantastic fic and really hope you continue it. It was a fantastic look into the psyches of two of the most interesting characters on Blade. I like how you didn't suger coat it (too many people did that with the Season 6 Buffy/Spike relationship). However interesting Marcus/Krista is, it IS screwed up and frankly I think that's what draws a lot of us to it.
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