misshoneywell ([info]misshoneywell) wrote,
@ 2006-08-07 02:04:00
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Twisted- Part One
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[info]bluebear_74
2006-08-07 07:35 am UTC (link)
I'm glad you decided to post the story here on Live Journal and join the community.

This is a great start and I can't wait for more. I also liked the switching of the POVs half way through.

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Interesting
(Anonymous)
2006-08-07 08:55 am UTC (link)
I liked that. Keep going.
I saw your "ad" in the Blade forum at comicmonsters.com.
Maybe I should try my hand at this alternate reality thing.

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[info]ladynaberrie
2006-08-07 09:17 am UTC (link)
Coooooooool.

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[info]gothic_nyx
2006-08-07 12:48 pm UTC (link)
This is an awesome story. Very well written on both points of view. I can't wait to read more :)

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[info]psychicpilgrim
2006-08-07 05:30 pm UTC (link)
Welcome to the community!

Good pacing. I like how you illustrated their conflicted feelings. Please do continue! :)

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[info]eve_28
2006-08-08 05:06 am UTC (link)
Wonderful! I love it, you really showed the conflict and tension between the two characters. I can't wait to read chapter 2! So hurry up sweetie!:)

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Awesome Story!
[info]carolannw5
2006-08-10 01:25 am UTC (link)
Thank you for writing this fic! I was also disappointed that there is hardly any Blade: The Series Fanfic! Awesome Start!

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[info]spuffy_seeker
2006-08-10 05:30 pm UTC (link)
this was a very good start. i very much liked his pov and how he let us into his head and thoughts on being a vamp.

would love to read more.

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(Anonymous)
2006-08-15 02:50 am UTC (link)
Awsome keep going

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(Anonymous)
2006-08-15 03:25 am UTC (link)
Love it so far, very well written. Can't wait for an update.

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[info]eve_28
2006-08-19 04:06 am UTC (link)
Wow! great story! Now...where is chapter two,hmmmmm? :)

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Wow!
(Anonymous)
2006-08-22 10:27 pm UTC (link)
Just browsing the unofficial fan site and noticed this posting called twisted.

Well done... just like the tv series this keeps you wanting more. What a great story line and unique perspective!!

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[info]teekoness
2006-09-16 04:13 am UTC (link)
This is a fantastic fic and really hope you continue it. It was a fantastic look into the psyches of two of the most interesting characters on Blade. I like how you didn't suger coat it (too many people did that with the Season 6 Buffy/Spike relationship). However interesting Marcus/Krista is, it IS screwed up and frankly I think that's what draws a lot of us to it.

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